Geithner Presents a Viable Plan to Dispose of the Toxic Assets...that Does Not Rule Out that Insolve

Geithner Presents a Viable Plan to Dispose of the Toxic Assets...that Does Not Rule Out that Insolvent Banks Should be Taken Over

Nouriel Roubini | Mar 25, 2009

A similar piece, co-authored with Matthew Richardson, was published at the New York Daily News:

For the economy to be viable, the financial system must be healthy, and for this to occur, the financial system needs to be cleansed of its poorly performing loans and so-called toxic securities backed by loans, such as mortgage backed securities. This way, once creditworthy institutions and individuals come to the market looking for capital to borrow, financial firms will be in a position to lend them the money and more generally able  provide financial services to the economy.

Secretary Geithner’s recently announced plan is a step in the right direction in that it creates a “Public-Private Investment Program” to purchase the troubled assets of financial firms, in other words, to do this cleansing.

Up until now, with all the government bailouts, the financial system has been barely treading water. With this plan, it will be a hard swim, but, at least, there is a path to shore. This is the likely reason the equity market responded so well yesterday.

The plan essentially calls for private asset management firms  - private equity, hedge funds, mutual funds, pension funds - to invest side-by-side with the government.  The government will also lend up to an additional six times the initial money. The plan needs the government because there are so many bad loans and securities held in the financial sector that only the government’s balance sheet can handle taking them over. The government needs help from private investors so they don’t get hoodwinked by the banks.

Why would investors participate? The government’s loan is structured so that the firm will only be responsible for losses on their initial investment. This is a huge sweetener. The hope is that this "freebie" will induce many investors to participate. The competition among them will lead to higher offer prices for the loans and securities, thus encouraging banks to sell them.

A lot of ifs, but if indeed successful, the plan accomplishes mission number one, namely the removal of the bad assets from the bank's balance sheets. Even if banks wanted to do this on their own, they can't because the market for these illiquid assets has dried up.

But let's not have any illusions.

The government bears the risk after first losses of the loans. If the economy gets worse, it could get

very ugly, very quickly. The administration should be transparent that there is still a wealth transfer taking place from taxpayers to investors and banks.

Also, while this is pretty clearly in the Treasury's plan, many of the big guarantees are placed in the hands of the FDIC and the Fed. Why not only use Treasury facilities like TARP? Well, the administration would have to deal with Congress to appropriate more funds. While the events of last week and their ill-conceived compensation bill suggests this end around might make sense, there is something a little worrying about circumventing the legislative system in place.

Finally, a big problem is lack of transparency in the system - no one knows what the loans or securities are worth. Competing investors will help solve this by promoting price discovery. But be careful what you wish for.

Some banks will most likely resist selling their loans and securities. Why? Currently, the government has been providing them a free option to continue holding them with the hope that market conditions will improve.

The government must, however, insist on the bank’s involvement in the program. The reason that financial institutions should be “pressured” is that they are the cause of the financial crisis. They took advantage of loopholes to avoid regulatory requirements, taking a huge bet on securities they were never meant to hold in the first place.

But what happens if removing toxic assets from the bank’s balance sheet at near market prices shows it is effectively insolvent? This is a real possibility.

Then we will have to face the big elephant in the room.

So far, due to the lack of transparency about the conditions of large banks, policymakers  have been able to throw around lots of money to  keep insolvent banks afloat in order to avoid systemic risk. But once the truth is revealed, perhaps we will have to start asking, "Why keep insolvent banks afloat?" And having asked that, we will have to turn our minds to a search for ways in which to manage the ensuing systemic risk.

Either way, once the plan is fully implemented, we will be entering a new phase of the financial crisis. Let’s hope we are strong swimmers.

To clarify my viewpoint: I see the Geithner plan as being relevant only to banks that are solvent. For those that are found - after stress tests - to be insolvent I see as the proper solution - -as I have widely written - to nationalize them and thus clean them up to prepare them for re-privatization.

The stress test should do a triage between banks that are illiquid and undercapitalized but solvent given the provision of capital and liquidity and those that, under a reasonable stress scenario are effectively insolvent. Those that are insolvent should be nationalized.

Those that are solvent will still have many toxic assets that need to be disposed of; and the Geithner plan provides a way to properly dispose of the toxic assets of solvent banks.  So my partial support of the Geithner plan - with all the appropriate caveats regarding forcing banks to sell toxic assets and accepting the results of the auctions - is consistent with the complementary idea of nationalizing the insolvent financial institutions.

The bad assets of insolvent banks that are nationalized could be separated from the good assets and then worked out by the government (but the government is not very good in that business); or they could be sold to private investors through an auction mechanism along the lines of the Geithner plan; or they could be sold - together with the good assets - to the investors purchasing a privatized bank that was temporarily privatized (along the lines of the Indy Mac deal where the investors purchasing the bank received a government guarantee on the bad assets after a first loss).

The toxic assets of the solvent banks still need to be disposed of as no private investor will participate in the recapitalization of solvent banks that are still full of bad assets. Of  the four available options for disposing of the toxic assets of the of solvent banks (the government purchashing them in a reverse auction; keeping them on the banks' book with a guarantee after a first loss (the approach talken with Citi and Bank of America); selling them to private investors with a guarantee after a first loss; or finally the Geithner plan) the Geithner plan provides a solution that is likely to be superior to the other three. If the government were to buy these assets it would be the only bidder in a reverse auction and price revelation problem would be severe. Keeping them on the banks' books with a gurantee after a first loss has been a disaster - as the experience with Citi and Bank of America shows. Selling them to private investors with a guarantee after first loss would be very non-transparent in the price revelation objective.

So, having private investors bidding for the toxic assets - as in the Geithner plan - ensures a better price revelation that would be impossible in a reverse auction where the government is the only bidder. Also note the the idea - supported by many including myself - of converting some of the unsecured debt into equity to recapitalize banks - works for insolvent bank that go through a receivership proces; it cannot be applied to solvent banks that need recapitalization. In conclusion the Geithner plan is not an alternative to nationalization: insolvent banks should be nationalized and the Geithner plan should not apply to them. But solvent banks still need to have their toxic assets disposed of; and for this banks the Geithner plan provides a solution that - all in all - is better than the alternative.

Those who dont like the Geithner plan on the basis that they prefer nationalization are right - as i agree - that the insolvent banks should be nationalized. But  they usually dont give an explanation of how they would dispose of the toxic assets of solvent banks. They seem not to like the Geithner plan because it would provide a subsidy to the investors. But ensuring participation of private investors in the risk and in the price revelation is worth that subsidy. Otherwise those who criticize the Geithner plan as a solution to the toxic assets of solvent banks should come up with an alternative that works and that is less costly to the government than the Geithner plan.

A similar piece, co-authored with Matthew Richardson, was published at the New York Daily News:

For the economy to be viable, the financial system must be healthy, and for this to occur, the financial system needs to be cleansed of its poorly performing loans and so-called toxic securities backed by loans, such as mortgage backed securities. This way, once creditworthy institutions and individuals come to the market looking for capital to borrow, financial firms will be in a position to lend them the money and more generally able  provide financial services to the economy.

Secretary Geithner’s recently announced plan is a step in the right direction in that it creates a “Public-Private Investment Program” to purchase the troubled assets of financial firms, in other words, to do this cleansing.

Up until now, with all the government bailouts, the financial system has been barely treading water. With this plan, it will be a hard swim, but, at least, there is a path to shore. This is the likely reason the equity market responded so well yesterday.

The plan essentially calls for private asset management firms  - private equity, hedge funds, mutual funds, pension funds - to invest side-by-side with the government.  The government will also lend up to an additional six times the initial money. The plan needs the government because there are so many bad loans and securities held in the financial sector that only the government’s balance sheet can handle taking them over. The government needs help from private investors so they don’t get hoodwinked by the banks.

Why would investors participate? The government’s loan is structured so that the firm will only be responsible for losses on their initial investment. This is a huge sweetener. The hope is that this "freebie" will induce many investors to participate. The competition among them will lead to higher offer prices for the loans and securities, thus encouraging banks to sell them.

A lot of ifs, but if indeed successful, the plan accomplishes mission number one, namely the removal of the bad assets from the bank's balance sheets. Even if banks wanted to do this on their own, they can't because the market for these illiquid assets has dried up.

But let's not have any illusions.

The government bears the risk after first losses of the loans. If the economy gets worse, it could get

very ugly, very quickly. The administration should be transparent that there is still a wealth transfer taking place from taxpayers to investors and banks.

Also, while this is pretty clearly in the Treasury's plan, many of the big guarantees are placed in the hands of the FDIC and the Fed. Why not only use Treasury facilities like TARP? Well, the administration would have to deal with Congress to appropriate more funds. While the events of last week and their ill-conceived compensation bill suggests this end around might make sense, there is something a little worrying about circumventing the legislative system in place.

Finally, a big problem is lack of transparency in the system - no one knows what the loans or securities are worth. Competing investors will help solve this by promoting price discovery. But be careful what you wish for.

Some banks will most likely resist selling their loans and securities. Why? Currently, the government has been providing them a free option to continue holding them with the hope that market conditions will improve.

The government must, however, insist on the bank’s involvement in the program. The reason that financial institutions should be “pressured” is that they are the cause of the financial crisis. They took advantage of loopholes to avoid regulatory requirements, taking a huge bet on securities they were never meant to hold in the first place.

But what happens if removing toxic assets from the bank’s balance sheet at near market prices shows it is effectively insolvent? This is a real possibility.

Then we will have to face the big elephant in the room.

So far, due to the lack of transparency about the conditions of large banks, policymakers  have been able to throw around lots of money to  keep insolvent banks afloat in order to avoid systemic risk. But once the truth is revealed, perhaps we will have to start asking, "Why keep insolvent banks afloat?" And having asked that, we will have to turn our minds to a search for ways in which to manage the ensuing systemic risk.

Either way, once the plan is fully implemented, we will be entering a new phase of the financial crisis. Let’s hope we are strong swimmers.

To clarify my viewpoint: I see the Geithner plan as being relevant only to banks that are solvent. For those that are found - after stress tests - to be insolvent I see as the proper solution - -as I have widely written - to nationalize them and thus clean them up to prepare them for re-privatization.

The stress test should do a triage between banks that are illiquid and undercapitalized but solvent given the provision of capital and liquidity and those that, under a reasonable stress scenario are effectively insolvent. Those that are insolvent should be nationalized.

Those that are solvent will still have many toxic assets that need to be disposed of; and the Geithner plan provides a way to properly dispose of the toxic assets of solvent banks.  So my partial support of the Geithner plan - with all the appropriate caveats regarding forcing banks to sell toxic assets and accepting the results of the auctions - is consistent with the complementary idea of nationalizing the insolvent financial institutions.

The bad assets of insolvent banks that are nationalized could be separated from the good assets and then worked out by the government (but the government is not very good in that business); or they could be sold to private investors through an auction mechanism along the lines of the Geithner plan; or they could be sold - together with the good assets - to the investors purchasing a privatized bank that was temporarily privatized (along the lines of the Indy Mac deal where the investors purchasing the bank received a government guarantee on the bad assets after a first loss).

The toxic assets of the solvent banks still need to be disposed of as no private investor will participate in the recapitalization of solvent banks that are still full of bad assets. Of  the four available options for disposing of the toxic assets of the of solvent banks (the government purchashing them in a reverse auction; keeping them on the banks' book with a guarantee after a first loss (the approach talken with Citi and Bank of America); selling them to private investors with a guarantee after a first loss; or finally the Geithner plan) the Geithner plan provides a solution that is likely to be superior to the other three. If the government were to buy these assets it would be the only bidder in a reverse auction and price revelation problem would be severe. Keeping them on the banks' books with a gurantee after a first loss has been a disaster - as the experience with Citi and Bank of America shows. Selling them to private investors with a guarantee after first loss would be very non-transparent in the price revelation objective.

So, having private investors bidding for the toxic assets - as in the Geithner plan - ensures a better price revelation that would be impossible in a reverse auction where the government is the only bidder. Also note the the idea - supported by many including myself - of converting some of the unsecured debt into equity to recapitalize banks - works for insolvent bank that go through a receivership proces; it cannot be applied to solvent banks that need recapitalization. In conclusion the Geithner plan is not an alternative to nationalization: insolvent banks should be nationalized and the Geithner plan should not apply to them. But solvent banks still need to have their toxic assets disposed of; and for this banks the Geithner plan provides a solution that - all in all - is better than the alternative.

Those who dont like the Geithner plan on the basis that they prefer nationalization are right - as i agree - that the insolvent banks should be nationalized. But  they usually dont give an explanation of how they would dispose of the toxic assets of solvent banks. They seem not to like the Geithner plan because it would provide a subsidy to the investors. But ensuring participation of private investors in the risk and in the price revelation is worth that subsidy. Otherwise those who criticize the Geithner plan as a solution to the toxic assets of solvent banks should come up with an alternative that works and that is less costly to the government than the Geithner plan.


[Briefing] A ghoulish prospect

American banks

A ghoulish prospect

Feb 26th 2009 | NEW YORK
From The Economist print edition

Nationalisation carries risks, but it may still be the best way to deal with American banking’s undead


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IN A classic horror film, “Night of the Living Dead”, a terrified group of people barricade themselves in a rural farmhouse to escape hordes of flesh-eating zombies. Today Americans are gripped by a similar fear, but this time the walking corpses in their nightmares are banks, tearing insatiably at the public purse. As the Obama administration struggles to get its poorly received bank-rescue plan up and running, it is being pressed to respond to suspicions that some large banks are on the edge of insolvency, if not already there.

In a matter of weeks nationalisation has gone from taboo to talking point. Economists debate its pros and cons across the blogosphere. Politicians on both left and right accept that America’s sickest banks may need to be taken over and restructured and their good parts returned to private ownership. Even Alan Greenspan has become an advocate.

Although the government continues to resist such calls, its hand may be forced by the results of the “stress tests” that it began to perform on February 25th on the 19 largest banks. Officials’ own stress levels are running in inverse relation to the banks’ share prices. Those of Citigroup and Bank of America plumbed new lows on February 20th (see chart 1). That prompted the Treasury and a group of regulators to declare that they stood “firmly” behind the banking system, but that their “strong presumption” was that banks would remain in private hands. Ben Bernanke, the chairman of the Federal Reserve, went further, saying in congressional testimony this week that nationalisation “is when the government seizes the bank and zeroes out the shareholders…we don’t plan anything like that.”

Even so, the neediest banks are heading that way. As The Economist went to press, the government was in talks with Citigroup over what would in essence be partial nationalisation: the conversion into common equity of a chunk of its preferred stock, obtained in return for pumping capital into Citi last year. This would give it a stake of up to 40%—eight times the holding of Prince Alwaleed bin Talal, the most influential existing shareholder—and voting power to match.

Citi approached regulators about the conversion, fearful of being swamped by further losses as the recession and housing crisis deepen. The deal would mark the bank’s surrender in its battle to persuade investors that its reasonably healthy “tier-one” ratio is a convincing measure of capital adequacy. These days markets prefer measures using tangible common equity, which is undiluted by hybrid capital such as preferred stock (see article).

The government may end up repeating this across the industry. The first step in its Capital Assistance Program will be the stress tests, which will take a few weeks. The aim will be to map potential losses in a two-year recession with unemployment rising as high as 10.3% and house prices continuing to tumble. If the testing shows that banks need more capital, they can first try to raise it over six months from private sources. If they fail, they will get government help. The state will take preferred stock (paying a 9% dividend) that converts into common equity if needed.

This strikes some as fiddly at a time when the markets crave boldness. Drip-feeding equity as needed avoids the appearance of nationalisation. But by adding to the complexity of banks’ capital structures and not revealing what would constitute adequate capital it risks sowing confusion about their ability to ride out losses.

Next for shaving

Nor has the government brought clarity to its treatment of bondholders, which was anything but consistent under the previous administration: Bear Stearns’s creditors got their money, Washington Mutual’s were all but wiped out. Credit-default swaps on Citi have widened lately (see chart 2), as have those on other big banks. This reflects fears that the state, in return for injecting more capital, might force a “haircut” on creditors, who sit above shareholders in the capital structure.

Compelling troubled banks to default on their debt may seem just. Christopher Whalen, an independent banking analyst, argues that some banks’ bondholders may have to take a hit if depositors are to be made whole. The danger, however, is that this causes the sort of liquidity runs that wreaked havoc after the demise of Lehman Brothers last September.

If bond investors are forced to share the pain, they may at least want some potential gain. Some restructuring specialists have suggested that bondholders be handed shares in the most troubled banks through debt-for-equity swaps, a common device in non-financial corporate workouts. That, however, would leave the banks partly owned by foreign governments and central banks. American politicians may find this unpalatable.

Doubt also surrounds a centrepiece of the bail-out plan announced by Tim Geithner, the treasury secretary, on February 10th: a public-private partnership to buy distressed mortgages and other bad assets. Mr Geithner envisages vulture investors snapping up as much as $1 trillion-worth of the stuff, helped by cheap government loans and perhaps a floor under prices. But details are still being worked on, leaving potential participants sceptical of its merits. Under Hank Paulson, his predecessor, two asset-buying plans foundered after proving unworkable.

Bank executives, meanwhile, are livid that they have not been consulted on the plan’s mechanics. They also question the logic of performing stress tests that do not take account of the gains in store, at least for some banks, if a market for distressed assets takes off. It could send the prices of the most illiquid securities up by 80% in short order, reckons one chief executive.

Even if banks can offload at reasonable prices the dross they piled up in the boom, they have lots of other assets that will sour this year, from credit-card debt to corporate loans. High-quality, or “prime”, mortgages look ever wobblier, too, as joblessness climbs towards 8%. American banks have recognised more than $1 trillion in credit losses, but most analysts think this is only around half the final tally. The most pessimistic expect losses on American loans to reach $3 trillion-4 trillion.

Regulators insist that the big banks are, by and large, well capitalised despite their flurry of write-offs. Just as important, the industry as a whole is still producing fairly strong cash flows: higher in the rocky third quarter of 2008 than in the calm first quarter of 2007, points out Dick Bove of Rochdale Research.

But this masks huge variation. Some regional banks are thriving, especially those that avoided dodgy mortgages and loans to property developers. Hudson City Bancorp, a New Jersey thrift that wrote only high-quality mortgages through the boom and insisted on down-payments of 20%, recently announced record profits. According to a survey by Greenwich Associates, such conservative lenders are picking up market share from rivals that rely on government support. But Hudson is in the minority. The number of banks on the Federal Deposit Insurance Corporation’s problem list was expected to rise sharply, from 171, when the FDIC published its quarterly update on February 26th, after The Economist went to press.

Fortunes vary among the giants, too. No one doubts that the sums still needed to put Citi on a sure footing exceed its current market value of about $14 billion. The capital conversion would be its third bail-out in four months. Bank of America is also in poor shape, thanks to its disastrous purchase of Merrill Lynch and its heavy exposure to enfeebled consumers. JPMorgan Chase, the healthiest of the big banks, is nevertheless taking no chances. It cut its dividend this week to save $5 billion in equity. It said this was a precaution, in case conditions worsen dramatically.

What should be done with “systemically important” banks that perform poorly in the stress test? Throwing yet more capital at them risks perpetuating what Paul Krugman, a Nobel prize-winning economist, calls “lemon socialism”, in which banks reap the gains but taxpayers eat the losses. It was handouts without proper workouts that led to Japan’s “lost decade”.

Hence the growing calls for the clean break offered by temporary nationalisation—or “conservatorship”, as some prefer. This involves several steps: ascertain which banks are insolvent, take them over, sever the most toxic assets and sell them over time or hold them to maturity. The good parts would be sold to the public or a strategic buyer as quickly as is feasible. These healthy banks would be fit to lend, benefiting the overall economy. The taxpayer may even avoid losses.

This may present another opportunity: to accelerate the break-up of banks that have become too big to fail. This was a problem before the crisis. Shotgun takeovers of weaklings, such as Bear Stearns, Merrill and Wachovia, have made it worse. Citi is considered particularly unmanageable.

Death and taxes

This degree of interference would strike some as un-American. But the government’s tentacles are already wrapped around the banking industry, through debt guarantees, loss-sharing agreements, central-bank facilities and capital infusions, not to mention pay caps. It may take up voting rights on its common stock. As Mr Bernanke pointed out this week, banks cannot do whatever they like with capital they receive from the state. Citi already has to clear strategic decisions with regulators.

Moreover, far from being an alien concept, nationalisation is, as Mr Krugman has put it, “as American as apple pie”. Banks have often been seized by the state, in the form of the FDIC. Some of them, such as Washington Mutual, have been big. The FDIC runs those with assets that it cannot sell quickly, as it did with IndyMac, a Californian lender, before finding a group of private-equity buyers in January.

Even the most vocal proponents of this approach accept the need to tread with care. Those banks deemed insolvent would have to be dealt with in one go, to avoid the seizure of one bank starting a run on the liabilities of others that are seen as weak, points out Nouriel Roubini of New York University’s Stern School.

That is not the only risk. Political owners find it hard not to meddle: they have wasted no time turning America’s mortgage agencies and Northern Rock, a British bank, into tools of the state, or arm-twisting banks that took taxpayer money into modifying mortgages. And state control tends to rattle nerves abroad. Mexico’s authorities, for instance, are sure to frown on Citi’s local subsidiary, Banamex, falling into the hands of another government.

Moreover, the nationalisation of American International Group, an insurer, is no advertisement. In state hands AIG has gone from bad to worse. Already in hock to the taxpayer for $150 billion, it is estimated to have lost another $60 billion in the last quarter of 2008 and is reported to be in talks about a further bail-out and possible break-up. Adding to its woe, the auction of an Asian subsidiary faltered this week.

Then there is the exit strategy. Governments can become attached to banks they get their hands on. Those that resist the temptation cannot always find buyers. It took the FDIC seven years to sell Continental Illinois, which failed in 1984. Sweden deftly managed its overhaul and flotation of bust banks in the 1990s, but its financial system was much smaller and simpler than America’s today.

Finally, government takeovers are risky amid a systemic crisis because of the scale and distribution of creditors’ potential losses. Jeffrey Gordon of Columbia Law School cites Citi as an example. With total liabilities of $1.9 trillion and deposits of just $800 billion, not all of them insured, it has over $1.1 trillion of claims at risk in the event of a seizure. Their value would depend on how much the receiver would get for the bank’s assets. Were it to push for a quick sale, the price would doubtless be low, clobbering creditors that included pension and money-market funds. Though full-blown nationalisation “appeals to the desire for a clean sweep and the punitive distribution of losses”, it is, Mr Gordon argues, a gamble.

Is there a way to deal with bombed-out banks that falls short of greatly increased government ownership? Some, nostalgic for the past, point to the Latin American debt crisis of the 1980s. Then, Western regulators went soft on their banks, allowing even the insolvent to limp along until they had regained enough strength to withstand the Brady-bond restructuring. But that is an imperfect parallel. The economy was in better shape, so it was easier for banks to return to health. And there was no mark-to-market accounting. Suspending that today would ease the burden on banks, but would also make it easier to avoid admitting to losses.

With such forbearance unlikely this time, greater state control seems inevitable, despite its drawbacks. To keep recapitalising hopelessly insolvent banks without more draconian measures merely necessitates further bail-outs, argues Joseph Mason, an expert on banking crises at Louisiana State University. He suggests the Depression as a model: the Reconstruction Finance Corporation ended up with effective control over large parts of the banking system. It used its power to fire executives and shake up operations, with dramatic results. In each successive crisis, he says, authorities have to relearn the lessons applied by private-equity firms: “Keep control of the firm and the capital.”

That is hard to swallow in a country that likes its capitalism red in tooth and claw. But better a temporary ward of the state than a permanent zombie.


The Crisis of Credit Visualized


IB Cover Letter

3 Reasons Why Your Investment Banking Cover Letter is Making You Look Like a Fool and What to Do About It

“I have read Monkey Business, Liar’s Poker, and When Genius Failed each 3 times and consider them my collective bible. I know I have the eye for perfection and artistic vision to create truly immaculate pitch books. I am a Microsoft Certified in Excel, and I know all the shortcut keys (alt-i then r, that will insert a new row).”

-RE: Lehman Brothers Recruiting, The Leveraged Sellout

(Just ignore the Lehman reference for a moment…)

Despite my claims that “we never read cover letters,” some readers have pointed out that almost all banks require them. And some places might even pay attention to them.

I’ve seen lots of cover letters from customers lately - and nearly all of them suffer from the same problems.

Here’s how to avoid these common mistakes and how to structure your cover letters properly, so you can avoid looking like The Joker.

Let’s Set the Record Straight: Who Actually Reads Them?

In 99% of cases, only small boutiques (or small private equity firms) actually care about cover letters.

Big banks don’t have the time to go through stacks of cover letters. Remember the 30-second rule: if only 30 seconds are spent reviewing your resume and making a yes/no decision, you can imagine how much time is spent on the cover letter.

Small places care more because 1) “Fit” is extremely important when there are only 4 people in the office and 2) They actually have time to read cover letters (occasionally).

The True Purpose of Cover Letters

Cover letters are similar to GPA / test scores: a great one doesn’t help you much, but a poor one can kill your chances if someone happens to notice it.

From the ones I’ve seen (both as a banker and as part of my business), there are a few mistakes that come up repeatedly - no matter who you are or what you’re applying to.

Mistake #1: Writing a Life Story, Not a Cover Letter

I’ve seen some really long cover letters before. Keep it to 1 page - 500 words or less - and ideally 300 words or less.

Yes, I’m sure you have a very interesting life story about how you were abandoned by your parents and raised by wolves on the outskirts of a tribal village, but please don’t tell me any of this.

Get to the point - who you are, what you’ve done, and why we should pay attention to you.

Mistake #2: Telling Me Your Favorite Book is Monkey Business

Microsoft Certified in Excel? Extra in American Psycho? Know the bank’s market share in Mongolian M&A deals?

Great, but don’t waste my time with this trivia. All I care about is whether you can do the work.

If you have a relevant skill, such as fluency in another language, that’s ok to bring up. But almost every other Skill/Activity/Interest is pointless.

Mistake #3: Writing The Sound and the Fury, Not a Cover Letter

Logic is key when you’re selling someone on yourself - and that’s what a cover letter does.

So don’t write a letter using stream of consciousness.

An amazing number of cover letters skip around and don’t present the applicant’s background coherently.

Just like any other type of writing, you need an introduction, a body, and a conclusion.

The Ideal Cover Letter

So how do you actually write a solid cover letter?

You use the structure below.

I was tempted to post a Word template, but I don’t want 3,000 daily visitors to copy it and to start using the same exact cover letter.

The Information at the Top

Nothing too fancy here. Your name and contact information could go on the right side, and the recruiter’s / firm’s name and contact information could go on the left.

If you don’t have a name, don’t panic - just use the company name and address instead. Yes, it’s better to have a real name and send it to a real person, but it’s not a deal-breaker.

Similarly, “Dear so-and-so” works better if the “so-and-so” is someone’s name but if you don’t have it, “Dear Sir or Madam” is acceptable.

Paragraph 1: Introduction

Here’s where you say who you are and how you learned of the opportunity - from networking, from an event, from a friend or however else you found out. Then you say what attracts you to the company and the specific position.

Keep this short - 2 to 3 sentences is best.  

Paragraph 2: Your Background

This is usually your longest paragraph. Start out by writing what you’re currently doing, and then give the relevant internships/jobs you’ve had. Focus on useful skills (e.g. financial analysis) and whatever you did that’s applicable to banking, trading, or whatever you’re applying for.

A reverse chronological structure works well because most of the time, your most relevant experience will also be the most recent.

I would use no more than 5 sentences for this one.

Paragraph 3: Why You’re a Good Fit

This is a shorter paragraph. You should explain why your skills / experiences match whatever you’re applying for and re-iterate what makes you interested.

If you have anything unique (for example, you’re applying to a middle-market private equity firm after having run your own middle-market company), you may also want to mention it here as another selling point.

Paragraph 4: Conclusion

Remind them that your resume is enclosed, give your contact information and say that you look forward to hearing from them soon. Keep this to a few short sentences.

Exceptions

Sometimes this exact structure doesn’t work - if you’ve had more extensive experience (i.e. you’re not just out of undergraduate or business school) or have unusual circumstances, you may want to write something slightly different.

Let’s say you’re applying to investment management firms in China and you grew up there, having moved abroad when you were 10 - in that case you probably want to use 1 paragraph for your “finance experience” and another paragraph for your “China experience” rather than just writing 1 “background” paragraph.

No matter what your background, though, keep your cover letter brief, logical and relevant.

Otherwise you look like a fool.


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예를 들어 http://takabeeri.egloos.com이라는 주소를 '에리의 아틀리에' 라는 이름으로

나오게 하고 싶으시면 <a href=http://takabeeri.egloos.com>에리의 아틀리에</a>를

추가하시면 됩니다

즉  <a href=주소>설명</a>를 넣으시면 됩니다

그림으로 링크하시려면 <a href=주소><img src=그림 파일 주소></a>로 하시면 OK


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